Fresh kill

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Swiftpelt drops prey down at Mudpelt's feet. "Here is some more fresh-kill Mudpelt." Then she let out a rasping cough.




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*Nods and heads toward bluestars den*

Swiftpelt joins there with Orboclaw and Hydropelt. "Bluestar left to hunt.... But she hasn't come back. I tried to follow her scent, but.........." Swiftpelt shivered, then relaxed a bit to finish her discussion. "The trail disappeared. I searched frantically, but it was no use. If I know Bluestar, she'll be back, but I'm worried for her. What if......" She trailed off, now quivering.

No......i smell.....she's ...... i can't bear to say it......

thats riverclan sent

She's alive....

yes but not close

Rushes toward her scent* We MUST find her! She has only one life left!!

calm down*snifs*thats it,i think we need evret one to go on a partrol*jumps on high rock*i will lead a patrol to sunningrocks, with leafpaw and sharpclaw hydropelt you will go to snake rock with brambleclaw,and berrypaw and speedface and bluepaw will go around the border and every on else garud the camp

(my name's Blazeheart now) *nods, and heads out of camp*

*at sunning rocks**snifs*i smell a stale trace of bluestars scent*looks up*we better hurry because its gonna rain

Hears thunder* I'm not one to be scared, but are you sure this is safe? I think i'd handle this better if i guarded camp.....

ok but send a warrior back here to be withus

Got it! *goes back, and reappears* I changed my mind. Let's go.

Swiftpelt takes a quick sniff then disappears behind a bush. She later reappears with Bluestar's body, then gently sets her down.
"No...." Swiftpelt moans. "She's....." She lets out a mournful wail.

Swiftpelt, you were the power that would lead the stars. I've never doubted it since the day you were born. I walk with Starclan now.

"Wind will speed by, with the power to lead the stars." Swiftpelt whispered, starting to drag Bluestar back to camp. Becoming leader herself the last thing on her mind.

(so are we doing a different story here?, cause this is not the school story(and please don't go that far, you're making it sound like you are the main character!)

(Hearing her wail, Blazeheart catches up to Swiftpelt(star), and gives her a friendly swipe across the ear, then tries to comfort her) Hey. don't sweat it! Things aren't going to get that bad! !(hopefully, Blazeheart thinks...)Sometimes things like this happen, it's part of clan life. I was very close to Bluestar, too, but to survive, we have to get over it, and move on. Now don't worry.

Swiftpelt spins around angrily. "Don't sweat it? Are you serious?! Our leader DIES, and you do not mourn her death?" Swiftpelt enters camp with Bluestar. "I will sit vigil for her tonight."
Swiftpelt swerves onto the Highrock. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the highrock for a clan meeting." She meows.

*feeling hurt, especially because she is his best friend, Blazeheart slowly walks to highrock, and is the farthest from highrock*(don't feel offended, it's just for the game! )

Swiftpelt gulps. "Bluestar is dead."

*waves of shock ripple through the crowd, but Blazeheart keeps looking at the ground*

"But before I leave for Moonstone tonight, I have one thing to say." Swiftpelt meowed. "Blazeheart will be the new deputy."

*a surprised look rushes through his eyes, then looks up and nods, then looks back down*

"Blazeheart." Swiftpelt(Star, we can say Swiftpelt(star) "Come with me." Disappears into her den

*confusion surges through him as he follows*